Editing: Cross cutting the bar and car scenes

To engage the audience more, I thought it would be a good idea to cross cut the car scene and the bar scene because the car scene shows what she is capable of which answers her dialogue "It's funny how they don't know what I'm capable of".

I asked the group about what they thought about this before editing, however they weren't sure how to visualise what I meant so I edited the footage to show them. 

Using the razor cut tool I cut the parts I wanted from each scene and pieced them together in this order:

Car scene: Walking into car
Bar scene "it's funny how they don't know what I'm capable of"
Car scene "is this all I need?"
Bar scene "they don't", *glass clink*
Car scene "Yes kaya-sama"
Footage of photographs over the dialogue from car scene "get rid of these rats and you'll gain the yakuza's approval"