What could be improved? I think I need to edit the credits because the last line is too close to the symbols and company logos in the right hand corner. The colour isolation effect stands out however I need to go back and edit the edges because if you zoom in you can see a minor grey outline around some of the flowers. I'm not 100% sure about the slogan too; perhaps I need to change the font style because it looks too uniform.
I may need to reconsider the fonts for the sell lines because they don't look as appealing as I would like them to look. I am content with the images on the right hand side however the font for the title beneath the images look somewhat out of place; maybe the colour white is not the appropriate colour... I think I need to edit the barcode to be in line with the bottom line of the headline. I also may need to lighten the male model's shoulders so that his blazer doesn't blend in too much with the background or I could lighten the background. I also need to add a slogan near the masthead. I might edit the sell lines so they are more interesting.
